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Book
3
-
Thought
Dump
Edaphlas:
The
Inner-Kingdom
Skyland:
In
skyland
there
will
be
a
portion
of
ground
that
is
glowing
and
light
is
glowing
through
the
snow.
This
will
be
a
part
of
moving
the
plot.
Could
be:
a
certain
item
glowing
in
the
snow.
a
pathway
somewhere
a
hole
a
beginning
of
lights
where
the
party
travels
further
and
finds
more
lights
In
Rexburg
Idaho
there
is
a
Porter
Park.
In
this
park
there
is
a
small,
brick
building
sitting
on
the
North
side
of
it.
I
was
thinking
that
Clal
could
approach
a
house
like
this
when
they
first
come
onto
the
skyland.
Inside
would
be
a
crochety
old
man
who
doesn't
want
any
visitors,
or
perhaps
a
faithful
servant
stationed
to
lead
the
visitors
to
the
center,
or
gateway
into
the
hidden
Kingdom.
The
servant
would
perhaps
note
that
no
one
has
ever
come
to
the
island
or
known
how
to
get
on.
This
may
be
an
interesting
fact.
Plot
Characters
The
F’element
of
Song
and
Its
Lesson
God
in
Edaphlas
The
song
within
us
or
the
voice.
Ideas
Possible
name
for
the
book
–
The
Legend
of
Island’s
Song
The
Sword,
The
Ice
Rod
When
Clal
gets
inside
or
just
outside
the
ice
fortress,
he
stops
and
is
instructed
by
the
guide
to
reach
up
and
grab
an
Ice
Rod
(icecycle)
along
an
overhang.
They
do,
and
use
the
Ice
Rods
in
hand
to
cross
an
icey
chiasm
or
fly
across
a
gulf.
Basically,
the
ice
rod
is
very
prevailant
in
their
culture
and
is
the
center
of
their
power.
It
will
be
a
central
part
of
the
world
of
Edaphlas.
A
Kingdom
Revealed
When
Clal
brings
Skyla
and
Larkin
down
from
Edaphlas,
people
are
surprised
to
see
these
elves,
the
word
spreads
about
Clal
and
the
fictitional
reality
manifests
his
calling
The
Spoken
Forest
A
forest
that
speaks
as
the
wind
moves
through
it.
Different
sounds
are
formed
by
the
wind
and
the
combinations
of
the
trees
characteristics:
shape,
size,
bark,
trunk
thickness.
When
the
wind
blows
people
come
to
get
inspiration
from
what
they
hear.
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Theme:
Introduce
the
Importance
of
Song
for
my
Series
Book
One:
Theme:
Introduce
the
Importance
of
Song
for
my
Series
Edaphlas:
The
Inner-Kingdom
Skyland:
In
skyland
there
will
be
a
portion
of
ground
that
is
glowing
and
light
is
glowing
through
the
snow.
This
will
be
a
part
of
moving
the
plot.
Could
be:
a
certain
item
glowing
in
the
snow.
a
pathway
somewhere
a
hole
a
beginning
of
lights
where
the
party
travels
further
and
finds
more
lights
In
Rexburg
Idaho
there
is
a
Porter
Park.
In
this
park
there
is
a
small,
brick
building
sitting
on
the
North
side
of
it.
I
was
thinking
that
Clal
could
approach
a
house
like
this
when
they
first
come
onto
the
skyland.
Inside
would
be
a
crochety
old
man
who
doesn't
want
any
visitors,
or
perhaps
a
faithful
servant
stationed
to
lead
the
visitors
to
the
center,
or
gateway
into
the
hidden
Kingdom.
The
servant
would
perhaps
note
that
no
one
has
ever
come
to
the
island
or
known
how
to
get
on.
This
may
be
an
interesting
fact.
Plot
Characters
The
F’element
of
Song
and
Its
Lesson
God
in
Edaphlas
The
song
within
us
or
the
voice.
Ideas
Possible
name
for
the
book
–
The
Legend
of
Island’s
Song
The
Sword,
The
Ice
Rod
When
Clal
gets
inside
or
just
outside
the
ice
fortress,
he
stops
and
is
instructed
by
the
guide
to
reach
up
and
grab
an
Ice
Rod
(icecycle)
along
an
overhang.
They
do,
and
use
the
Ice
Rods
in
hand
to
cross
an
icey
chiasm
or
fly
across
a
gulf.
Basically,
the
ice
rod
is
very
prevailant
in
their
culture
and
is
the
center
of
their
power.
It
will
be
a
central
part
of
the
world
of
Edaphlas.
A
Kingdom
Revealed
When
Clal
brings
Skyla
and
Larkin
down
from
Edaphlas,
people
are
surprised
to
see
these
elves,
the
word
spreads
about
Clal
and
the
fictitional
reality
manifests
his
calling
The
Spoken
Forest
A
forest
that
speaks
as
the
wind
moves
through
it.
Different
sounds
are
formed
by
the
wind
and
the
combinations
of
the
trees
characteristics:
shape,
size,
bark,
trunk
thickness.
When
the
wind
blows
people
come
to
get
inspiration
from
what
they
hear.
--- page 3 ---
Eliza
R.
Snow
Building
Attic/Roof
Door
One
day
I
was
in
the
attic
in
the
Snow
building.
There
was
a
latter
then
a
door
to
get
out
onto
the
roof.
The
wind
was
blowing
hard
and
all
I
could
hear
was
the
wind
howling.
This
would
be
a
perfect
sound
to
listen
to
while
I
write
about
a
windy
place.
Who
would
have
thought
that
wind
could
yield
so
much
inspiriation?
Skyland
So,
as
it
is
difficult
to
represent
song
or
music
on
the
hilt
of
the
sword,
I’ve
related
song
to
a
few
more
defining
factors:
The
song
represents
the
song
of
the
earth
which
is
heard
upon
the
winds
of
nature.
The
Four
Winds
–
these
are
the
weinds
that
carry
mother
earth’s
song.
The
Northern,
Eastern,
Southern,
and
Western
winds.
Each
wind
has
a
sacred
name.
Along
with
making
things
grow
while
Clal
has
the
sword
in
hand,
he
will
also
have
the
four
winds
at
his
leasure
to
use
against
Womlon.
While
on
the
Skyland
Terrain,
the
song
of
the
earth
is
heard.
There
is
a
creature
that
lives
where
Skyland
was
moved
There
is
a
creature
that
lives
where
the
skyland
was
who
guards
or
just
lives
there.
He
serves
a
purpose
and
inadveratantly
helps
them
in
some
way.
The
queen
of
Skyland,
Edaphlas
Says
this:
A
Legend
The
light
of
a
new
day
The
question:
“How
do
you
know
when
the
night
is
over
and
a
new
day
has
begun?”
The
answer:
“When
you
look
into
the
east
and
see
the
face
of
a
woman
and
can
say,
‘She
is
my
sister,’
and
when
you
look
inito
the
east
and
see
the
face
of
aman
and
can
say,
‘He
is
my
brother,’
then
you
know
the
light
of
a
new
day
has
come.”
This
idea
is
based
on
the
article
found
in
the
January
2008
Friend
titled,
“The
Light
of
a
New
Day.”
I
want
to
apply
this
to
mystery.
Clal
may
see
something
in
the
faces
of
people
that
will
cause
him
to
understand
that
he
is
ready.
Clal
will
change.
He
wonders
why
he
sees
things
in
other
faces
like
changes
or
slight
movements.
People
do
not
see
as
he
sees
which
causes
some
interest
in
the
reader.
===
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Book
-
Thought
Dump
●
Goddess
moment:
when
clal
is
about
to
perish
in
the
ice
stage
of
his
ocean-dimension
journey,
the
twins
come
down
and
rescue
him.
Skyla
and
Larkin.
●
They
find
out
about
the
other
four
stones
at
the
end
of
Book
1
-
●
and
perhaps
they
find
the
chest
and
the
Book
of
Legends
in
the
Dawning
of
Time
Cave
●
So
what
does
be
given
or
is
given
in
the
secret
room
in
the
castle
if
not
the:
○
Book?
○
They
see
the
light
or
magic
with
the
stone
○
Given
the
stone
○
See
the
walls
and
pictures
to
remember
and
learn
from
○
Get
the
key
○
What
tools
are
they
given?
●
“No,”
said
Clal,
“I
know
where
to
get
some
weapons.”
Book
Two:
The
Mountain:
Beauty
Kelvkaroth:
The
Inner-Kingdom
Plot
Characters
The
F’element
of
Beauty
and
Its
Lesson
God
in
Kelvkaroth
T
Ideas
The
Leaf
Clal
picked
up
the
leaf
and
searched
its
surface.
“Ryth,
there’s
a
leaf
here.
How
do
you
suppose
it
got
here.”
Ryth
removed
himself
from
the
corner
where
he
was
searching
and
came
to
Clal’s
side.
“It
probably
blew
in
from
the
outer
realm.”
“But
the
opening
to
the
cave
was
blowing
out
air,
not
blowing
it
in.”
Clal
spoke
in
a
whisper.
“I
feel
a
draft
and
it
is
going
out,
against
our
chests.
The
leaf
must
have
come
from
down
there.”
“Perhaps
the
leaf
was
carried
from
outside
and
dropped
at
this
point
of
the
passage
way.
I
really
don’t
think
this
means
much
Clal.”
Ansa
stated
as
she
shook
her
head.
“Yet,
the
reality
is
that
we
are
looking
for
something
and
not
simply
travelers
with
a
diffinate
and
defined
destination.
Entertaining
possibilities
is
to
our
advantage.”
Clal
stated
then
focused
his
attention
on
the
leaf.
“I
wonder
what
kind
of
leaf
this
is.
Look
at
the
veins
in
it,
they
almost
look
silver.
And
the
tecture
is
much
different
than
any
I
have
felt.
There
must
be
something
more.”
“If
we
are
sure
that
there
is
an
Inner-Kingdom
beyond
the
opening
of
this
passage
way
then,
we
can
assume
that
this
leaf
could
yield
some
sort
of
evidence
of
such
an
existence.
What
do
we
know
so
far
about
the
f’element
that
we
are
searching
for?”
Lark
spoke
as
he
searched
the
faces
of
his
comrads.
“I
think
the
greatest
manifestation
of
our
path
set
before
us
is
what
was
displayed
on
the
mural
at
Time’s
Dawning.
It
showed
a
mountain.”
Ryth
spoke.
--- page 5 ---
“Yes,
I
took
the
liberty
to
copy
it
down.”
Ansa
revealed
the
pages
of
a
book
in
which
she
used
to
illustrate
the
mural’s
depiction
of
their
quest.
Everyone
surrounded
Ansa
as
she
took
out
her
light
stone
and
began
to
speak.
The
Sun
Spot:
From
circle
to
oval
Clal
held
up
a
thin
piece
of
metal
and
held
it
under
a
circle
of
light
that
was
protruding
from
the
ceiling
above.
As
he
continued
to
search
the
metal
he
bent
the
metal
out
of
habit
which
caused
the
circle
of
light
to
become
an
oval.
This
reminded
him
of
the
oval
he
had
seen
a
few
weeks
ago
which
sparked
a
thought
and
answered
a
question
which
caused
a
solution
and
now
they’re
on
their
way.
Somehow
the
bending
of
the
metal
and
the
making
of
the
oval
revealed
something
in
the
metal
that
he
would
not
have
seen.
Perhaps
the
protruded
parts
of
the
metal
were
aligned
and
created
a
pattern.
Veins:
The
Theme
Veins
in
leaves,
veins
in
rock,
veins
in
body;
same
veins
in
mountain
is
same
veins
in
leaf.
The
viens
in
the
rock
grow
and
are
magical.
Clal
catches
a
glimmer
of
a
vein
that
is
different
from
all
of
the
rewst
of
the
silver
veins
in
the
rocks.
They
do
not
figure
it
out
then
but
this
is
the
vein
that
is
from
the
center
of
the
earth,
from
the
stone
seed.
lava
purification,
beauty,
wealth,
gold,
value,
fire,
song,
illusion,
stone,
heat,
purity,
process
The
Tree
that
Bears
Stone
Fruit
It
bears
special
fruit
on
special
occasions
and
they
wait
for
it.
===
Book
1
In
or
on
Skyland
there
will
be
Ice
sculptures
all
around
that
will
hold
things.
Clal
will
pass
by
these
things
with
a
curiosity
in
his
thoughts.
Clal
will
be
on
Skyland
at
their
wits
end
and
will
sit
down
to
rest.
Clal
will
hear
a
voice
singing.
But,
it
will
not
sound
like
a
song
but
just
the
wind.
They
will
follow
the
song
along
their
way
until
it
disappears.
They
will
meet
the
song
again
before
they
return
to
Cul.
Camden’s
Lego
Ball
Camden
threw
a
huge
lego
ball
against
the
window
and
it
just
exploded
into
a
thousand
lego
pieces.
I
thought
that
something
like
that
would
work
well
in
my
story,
perhaps
from
an
enemy
or
just
to
portray
the
magic
within
the
ball.
Perhaps
an
ice
ball
that
shatters
and
becomes
something
great.
Book
children
will
be
a
huge
part
of
both
the
Inner
and
Outer
Kingdoms.
--- page 6 ---
Book
1:
Skyland
Is
Krothwing
on
or
off
Skyland?
Clal's
powers:
When
Clal
steps
inside
the
island
ring
the
wwinds
begins
to
blow
which
creates
a
whirlwind.
They
either
step
in
a
specific
spot
after
talking
with
the
creature
that
lives
there
and
begin
to
sail
upward,
or
they
just
step
foot
there
and
then
the
wind
begins.
Krothwing
can
meet
them
in
the
Edaphlas
fortress
in
desquise.
He
may
also
meet
them
when
traveling
to
where
the
f'element
is
hidden.
(Krothwing
may
grab
Clal
in
a
crowd
and
tell
him
he
can
help.
Then
he
spins
his
little
web
and
betrays
Clal
in
the
end
and
fight
eachother.)
Where
is
the
f'element
hidden
in
Skyland?
in
a
room
in
the
fortress
hidden
among
the
land
somewhere
why
would
the
f'element
be
out
of
the
reach
of
the
king
of
Edaphlas?
Perhaps
it
is
at
the
heart
of
Edaphlas
and
only
Clal
can
remove
it.
Does
he
replace
it
with
anything?
(possible
subplot)
The
concept
of
the
f'elements
being
at
the
heart
of
each
of
the
inner-kingdoms
is
worthy
of
further
development.
An
example
of
some
dialog
from
Book
1's
climax
scene.
“I
have
orders
from
Hanonthaine
to
defeat
you
Clal
Winden.
That
is
precisely
what
I
intend
to
do
with
you.”
Krothwing
shifted
his
stance
and
leaned
toward
Clal
and
whisper.
“You
cause
no
threat
to
the
devises
of
evil
which
we
possess.
Your
time,
which
has
been
short,
is
at
a
bitter
end.”
Before
Clal
could
think
about
the
words
Krothwing
had
uttered
this
new
found
enemy
was
rushing
towards
Clal
with
his
sword
raised
level
to
Clal's
throat.
There
was
nothing
about
Krothwing
that
would
suggest
any
sort
of
mercy
at
this
point;
the
sort
of
mercy
that
Clal
could
appreciate
and
surely
needed.
Clal
moved
in
time
to
unsheth
his
sword
and
meet
Krothwind's
blow
as
blade
struck
blade
in
mid-air.
Clal
was
not
prepaired
for
the
vibration
of
metal
that
came
after
the
swords
colided;
he
dropped
his
sword
and
grasped
his
painfilled
arm.
Tears
began
to
cloud
Clal's
vision
and
it
seemed
as
though
the
world
around
him
was
closing
in.
Things
had
all
gone
wrong
before
they
began.”
The
Banished
(Rishk)
3
rd
Book
–
Skeldruc
holds
a
cube,
like
the
rubik's
cube,
which
revolves
in
his
palm
on
its
point.
It
is
missing
two
sides
and
revolves
around
showing
that
the
looker
can
see
through
it.
--- page 7 ---
Working
in
the
ice
fields
There
is
King
in
one
of
the
four
Kingdoms
that
is
just
like
King
Benjamin.
Clal
first
meets
him
which
traveling
on
a
road.
He
sees
a
man
working
along
side
a
servant.
Clal
learns
much
from
the
man
who
seems
far
beyond
the
wisdom
of
any
other.
One
who
truly
understands
human
relationships
and
is
an
example
to
many.
how
will
Clal
get
back
to
deposite
the
f'elements?
:
by
way
of
dragon
Climax
scenes
book
1:
while
Clal
is
trying
to
leave
on
Sedrak