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Melds

They can have children.

But their children has to mix with other Melds-first gen melds- or else they can’t have children??? (Good?)

Because if a Meld

Meld + Elf = 3/4 Elf

Meld + Meld = 1/2 Elf

Meld + Human = 1/4 Elf

1/4 Elf + Elf = 3/4 Elf…..

1/4 Elf + Human = 1/8 Elf???

Book 5

Illia itself is an inner kingdom all along

Protected

The key is to bring the two islands together

Defeat evil - the they all travel to the outer kingdom

Where the white winged dragons reside

The outer kingdom exists outside of the fire that burns and purifies

The crystal of this inner kingdom is the core, the entire stone seed that had the element of light in it.

The light must be taken out, is the sun, and pushed into the sword to bring this final inner kingdom out…

Elements kept within inner kingdoms to be safe from evil

Taken out by deliverer

In fact SELDONOLUM means deliverer and specifically refers to the part of Clal as the one that delivers the people from the inner kingdom limits and “chains” of limited growth.

Then once elements are fused into ONE:

Strength to defeat increases

Power to unite islands

Power to bring all inner kingdoms back

Power to bring Illia and Hanna to the outer realms

Or

the outer kingdom is a shadow of what is to be if Womlon succeeds

Inner Kingdoms

Hidden

Are a legend

No one believes they exist

Crystal keepers

Element keepers

Under, up, in water, invisible/alternate dimension

Elves??? In all 4 kingdoms?

Crystal taken - 3 days - present?

Unreal and foreign

Questions: Should the inner kingdoms collapse? (Option 1: YES)

chaos begins to grow through new people

Complexities multiply

Could do things where Clal slowly gathers followers

OPTION 2: NO

…

The inner kingdoms and the crystal:

they only keep safe the crystal

They only gain magic and skill from the crystals

It does not power the magic to hide them

That’s another part of the magic

Instead:

they are safe nd hidden…

But there is a trade off for taking the crystal

Also, at the end of each book, the portals in the Dawning of Time serve as portals into the 4 Inner Kingdoms again.

They are used to go into the the Inner Kingdoms

But Clal finds a way to return the people to the outer world or…….they come in book 5….

Or in other books as the plot sees fit to use the civilizations.

Book 5

should all 4 inner kingdoms return at this moment in time?

Clal’s (and master characters’ ? ) tools to defeat evil:

fire to destroy - offense

Light to blind - offense

Earth to create walk ways in air - defense - walls

Air - voice, wind to encircle, of goddess what could be - offense

Final Victory Scene:

Clal needs all five elements

Each crystal -

Voice of - entity - or the voice of the dead

Flame of - goodness to purge evil

Dragon Summoner

Book 1 - How It Is Different

Live with Aunt and uncle - Goran and Willa

Book 4: The Twisted Peak - Kelvkoroth

blue veins…this correlates with the blue stone they have

Parents in this book

Stone: blue veins give a stark picture of blue veins in stone that they mine.

Details

Darkness when they get in to this place - the

They come in by the stone turtle with blue eyes

Follow glow of blue vein

Torches but of goin lights like hall

Everyone needs a stone to shed light

Ceremony when child gets their light

Train to wild the light

Blue stone - one type only

Melt and refine and mold to their family symbol

The ceiling is covered in light stones

Culture structure

Find helper to fight later in the end

Encounter a light ceremony

Eventual feeling of crystal (voice)

Meet the woman of light

She influences the people

Helps to know clal what to do

Visits the king and uqie elves

Gifts crystal of light to clal

Headed for edaphlas… (old plot point)

Travel toward

Boat

Dimension cla’s journey

Dragon - and their moment……

The Larkin and Skyla high before leaving

The push through the dimensions

Renter attack or while Rishk

Not extreme, a taste…

Renter says talon is dead

Talon is a wielder

Not sure of details.

WIELDERS STILL IN ILLIA:

no one has ever wielded all 5 elements

Clal will

Talon is a wielder of probably fire to make him extremely valuable, this is why he does work fast and the best…..

Dawning of time Cliff and lehi’s dream

IS MORGRETH A WIELDER?

IS GWYNN?

Crescent Keep Mountain Waterfall

Magic door there all along.

What’s inside of Crescent Keep

Is it Kelvkoroth?

OR, IT THE DOOR FROM THE DAWING OF TIME CLIFFS BEHIND THE WATERFALL?

THINGS TO FIGURE OUT BEFORE REWRITING BOOK 1

Womlon & Final Battle (some progress???)

His fatal flaw

Darkness, for he cannot produce light (or can he?)

Magic System (great progress)

Clal / Ansa Parents - wielders

Race Issues (man / elf / melds)

Inner Kingdom (when unhide (along way or at the end)

RISHK ORIGIN AND HOW THEY FORMED

Womlon’s Domain - limits / kingdom breadth and depth

Quotes:

into the light

Whispers from the deep

Book Names and Order

Book 1: The Summoned

Book 2: Sands of Illusion

Book 3: Skyland’s Rising

Book 4: The Twisted Peak

Book 5: Kingdom of Tides

Book 6: Wielders of the Dawn

Book 7: Book of Legends

Book 8: The (Second) Stone Seed

OTHER PLACES AND LOCATIONS

Pike’s Peak

Hidden Peak

Shifted Mountain

Crescent Keep

Cliffs of Change

Illia’s Deep

Crescent Hills

WIELDERS STUFF

Wielder Legends

Wielder Myths

Wielder Lore

“Stay away from that Wielder nonsense.”

The Wielders

Wielder Wars

Clal will naturally protrude his inner light because it’s so strong.

Only “the chosen one” could ever make it shine with no training.

It’s a special stone forged and molded and purified so it could perfectly detect.

One of a kind.

Clal must his new light stone is there for him to use.

He must use his “light stone” to find the dragon summoner.

He will be training to wield the light along the journey because he will feel the ring.

The dragon summoner is hidden to find it.

By the light.

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