| Chapters | Happening |
| The chosen one is born, and that’s when Morgreth, there is a sign |
| Pale forest? Brings new buds or growth, the 4 waters change direction, a star in the sky is seen through the arches. The arches tell and are doorways to the spirit realm. There is a mirror, a pool of water, that if looked within, you can see things that the naked eye cannot see. What would be the sign? Where does Morgreth live? In the pale forest down south. It’s about a 1.5 hour ride on horseback. He is steward over the pale forest, and one day |
| The sign of the birth | There is a flower, that blossoms, it’s different than any other flower on the tree, it has 6 points, and it is a star, and it shines, and the tree that has the blossom is no longer pale it regains it’s color is beginning to heal. Perhaps it takes in the moonlight when the saphire moon shines. |
| Many years prior | Morgreth, when the timing is right (or Felsawn but probably Morgreth), he goes into the 4 kingdoms and recruits, secretly, a few wielders from each kingdom and plants them, with an oath, to serve in secrecy all of their days. (Is it a couple who needs to have children to continue the wielder powers, but maybe they don’t tell them?) |
| There is a sign: a star in the east, of the coming of the deliverer, Seldinolum. 5 years before. And so, Gwen, Talon, the woman maiden of the castle, Jestro, the woman sings the after the prophecy which really sings the prophecy song to other words, and activates something in Clal? Not sure who else. 5 years is too short a time. Maybe it’s a baby, or a child. Children, Morgreth takes. Not sure. |
| RISHK - Rythe instance | They were heading up to meet with King Emish, as they just got word that King Emish has a most interesting bit of news, they were headed to scheme and to be in their “hide out” |
| RISHK - King Emish tips them off | About Talon having more than just backsmith skills. He enhances his craft with (fire and earth) powers. Or just “earth” powers. Which, the RISHK believe that he can help them reenter the Inner Kingdom’s with Earth power, just like Talon. |
| King emish and king nelbierd | King Emish needs information about the land so “buddies up” with the most high king. After years of worming around, his one goal is to find a wielder who can help them get aback into the inner kingdoms to steal the crystals before the chosen one is found. |
| King Emish finds out | One day, the king and King Emish are eating together, they talk about weapons, needs of King Emish, somehow it comes up that Talon is no ordinary blacksmith. He’s “gifted.” “What do you mean ‘gifted.’” Do not tell, but it’s like Talon wields a command over the metal and stone he works with. It’s uncanny, the precision, the balance, the quailty, and the speed. And, sometimes, he comes up with the most rare jewels and stone and metal. There is something about his work that has always seemed a bit magical. |
| Torment Talon to make weapons | Force Talon, create a place for Talon to have to use his wielder powers to speed up the creation of the weapons. Skeldruc is assigned to watch, through his illusion methods. They built a hideout underneath the blacksmith’s shop so Skeldruc can watch him. Krothwing stands by to be the messenger once the proof is obtained. |
| The Moment | One day, Skeldruc spies Talon going into a hidden room where he uses his powers to finish his work quicker. He’s cursing Renthar and the RISHK as he does it. What Skeldruc does not know is that Talon is preparing other things for the future in some way, for some reason, for someone. |
| He see’s him do it, waits till nightfall, then sends Krothwing to gether the others, then swiftly meets them in their hideout. |
| Prologue and beyond | The prologue dialogue happens, they are convinced that Talon can help them in their design to enter the inner kingdom. They decide to kidnap him, and tell Womlon that they’ve found a wielder. |
| Chapters | Happening |
| Prologue and beyond | The prologue dialogue happens, they are convinced that Talon can help them in their design to enter the inner kingdom. They decide to kidnap him, and tell Womlon that they’ve found a wielder. |
| Ch1 old friend | They leave Lyrune, rythe comes, talks about RISHK |
| Ch2 Camp fire | Stories and such, gifts, the river |
| Ch4 Eldan | Ansa’s dream, Market, Gwen, Talon gone, the inn |
| Ch5 The Exam | Exam, Clal quiet, MEET SOME MEAN BOYS, then a nice boy, run to the “chosen chamber” |
| Ch6 Ansa worries | Ansa to castle, Hittle, to “chosen chamber” |
| Ch 7 chosen chamber | Chosen chamber with Morgreth, find the Book of Legends, Morgreth leaves before they find out the words can’t be read, Jestro, exit through tunnel, need to go to Talon, first go to Gwen |
| Ch 8 Gwen’s and Talon’s | Back to Gwen, victuals and clothing, Talon’s place, burns by RISHK, (grab the sword and other weapons) , barely escape flames |
| Ch 9 Meeting Morgreth | Head to the woods and sleep, wake up, meets Morgreth, to tell the families that the kids are okay??? (Not sure about this part, not sure I want the city to catch on that Clal and Rythe and Ansa caused trouble.) Hittle lead them. Decide to go North as they believe the RISHK have Talon and they know that the RISHK have dealings in the North. HITTLE leads them and they go because they take them North. |
| Ch 10 Amnbir | Amnbir, Gulnerye, the translator |
| Ch 11 Dragon Tail river | Up the river, the guards attack, through the waterfall wall |
| Ch 12 | Fall behind water fall which causes Clal and the rest to finally realize what’s happening, that Clal, combined with the stone…has earth moving power. (1. The stone lighting up in the examination. 2. Opening up the “chosen one” chamber 3. Activating the Gulnerye symbol in the Amnber stone. 4. Moving the stone behind the waterfall. Clal is, unskilled and cannot wield his power properly yet. They find a tunnel. They don’t know where it leads but they hear voices. They come to a place where the wall is blocked off by stone and cement. They hear some voices. Talking. Find a wall that is “walled up” and hear voices…overhear where Talon is being taken. Outskirts of Emish North kingdom castle. They get out…opening the wall up after voices are gone, then closing it. Find themselves in a hideout. RISHK HIDE OUT |
| Gain some facts. Maybe it’s not about the instrument but it’s about the song. That’s the dragon summoner. There’s no instrument, only Clal, and the prophecy song, and his voice. No one knows the song. There’s no horn, no flute, it’s Clal’s voice. (Clal is the summoner, but he doesn’t find out until he’s there, in the dimension, realizing he doesn’t have the summoner and that he has to figure out how to summon the dragon. He says, “I am the dragon summoner.” |
| Ch 12 | So instead of finding the summoner, they find the RISHK hideout, which was not intended. |
| Ch 12 | They enter the hideout. |
| Ch 12 | They hear voices and right when Clal was about to touch the wall and listen, Ansa grabs his hand and tells him not to touch the wall. |
| Ch 12 | They hear that Talon is being taken to Reubus, where the Twisted Peak and Kelvkoroth is hidden. They are going to attempt to force Talon to simulate “the chosen one’s powers” to move earth and search around for the entrance. Renthar thinks he knows where it is. |
| Ch 12 | They then enter the RISHK chamber. HIGH STAKES. What do they learn there? |
| Ch 12 | Perhaps that since they just learned and understand now that Clal is a “wielder” they learn that the RISHK are wielders too. |
| Ch 12 | Rythe turns into search and hunt mode. He knows there’s something there that can help them with their quest, but that if they take anything, someone will surely know that “someone-they” were there. They find some specific things. And Rythe takes something but doesn’t tell, hides it, and they find out later what it is. |
| Ch 12 | They find out they are wielders too: [Renthar: Water/Nilth, Krothwing: air/Edaph, Imforo: fire/Kelv, Skeldruk: Earth/Mir, Womlon-Hanonethaine: light] |
| Ch 12 | Clal, Rythe, and Ansa start to panic as they see no way out. But, Clal realizes that they are wielders and that have to exit through the “closed-stone-doorway” and they have to find it before they come back. There are glowing balls of fire in the four corners. |
| Ch 12 | They exit the hideout, hear the RISHK coming and thrust into the woods, running for their lives again. |
| Ch 13 | To get Talon, that’s the plan, but they decide they need greater help as the RISHK are too powerful, they just found out how powerful. They are running to hide. They need help. They need to escape so the RISHK do not catch them. Hittle helps them, guides them again. But where? |
| Ch 13 | They are traveling north north west direction. Rythe encourages Clal to move some rocks, to bury or hide them somehow. And they do. And the wrong RISHK follow. It’s Krothwing again. Had he been spying on them. They do not know. But they are well hidden. But, they find out more of their plans from a comment Krothwing makes. It’s Skeldruc again that runs after them too, and they both talk, the two RISHK. In fact, Clal and the lot stop when they should be running, and Clal is trying to move the rocks…something to hide them. Maybe they find a cliff, small, lava rock, they open up a stone door there and hid within…or something. |
| Ch 14 | They travel further north and end up coming to the ocean, they wait there. There is no floating island, but they decide to study the ancient language, interpreters, and try to look at the pictures and maps, they find a map of the bottom of Edaphlas and a doorway on the bottom. They read the page and can only make out a few words. |
| Ch 14 | Doorway. Under the waves. Waves. Hide. Under. Chosen. Passage. |
| Ch 14 | They realize they need to find the floating island. So they continue to run west across the shoreline. They realize they need a boat too. |
| Ch 14 | They run west…and see the clouds, the ocean is getting more timultuous. They realize there is no wind, but that the waves are heaving themselves upon each other for no reason. |
| Ch 14 | They still need a boat. Or, maybe they run past the timultuous waves…and see a fisherman. They flag him down, he comes in and shores up. They talk to him. It is a boy, one of the boys that Clal met from the examination. He offers the boat, then tells Clal to come visit him some time. |
| Ch 14 | They go back to the waters and the sky grows dark, they embark. |
| Ch 15 is also Ch 14 |
| Ch 16 The Ocean Deep | Go toward the storm, and see the clouds in the sky, Ansa questions that they are going into the ocean with no dragon summoner. Clal continues to press forward, with no dragon summoner, but he keeps going. He feels and knows that he will find the summoner. end chapter with boat tipping over |
| Ch 17 A way through it | Find the water door, 5 dimensions, the almost death to Clal |
| Ch 17.2 | Wake up, feels like he is dead, summon the dragon, dragon comes, shows Hanone, then dragon takes him back through the dimensions to the dark raging storm to save his friends, ending the chapter with Clal falling off and into the great deep. |
| Ch 18 Taken | No RISHK, just Rythe and Ansa trying to keep alive. Then they go to the cliffs of the dawning of time (I don’t want this to feel like a second climax though. How to retrieve Rythe and Ansa in a less frantic way?) |
| Ch 19 The cliffs of the dawning of time | Fly over beauty of Illia, talk to dragon, they say good bye, but how will Clal be able to summon the dragon? Will him singing the song somehow magically reach Sedrak’s ears and heart??? And where is Sedrak going? (To meet with Morgreth?) They enter, the chamber, find out many things like, the crystals, the other things, Sedrak doesn’t know anything about this place and is limited as he’s been asleep and in the inner kingdom |
| The End | The last two things they discover is that there are 3 more companions that they need in their quest, they go through the door which smells like apples, and enter the cottage of their old home somehow magically through a portal. “Turl, we’re back,” Clal said, “but we can’t stay long.” |
| Chapters | Happening |
| The chosen one is born, and that’s when Morgreth, there is a sign |
| Pale forest? Brings new buds or growth, the 4 waters change direction, a star in the sky is seen through the arches. The arches tell and are doorways to the spirit realm. There is a mirror, a pool of water, that if looked within, you can see things that the naked eye cannot see. What would be the sign? Where does Morgreth live? In the pale forest down south. It’s about a 1.5 hour ride on horseback. He is steward over the pale forest, and one day |
| The sign of the birth | There is a flower, that blossoms, it’s different than any other flower on the tree, it has 6 points, and it is a star, and it shines, and the tree that has the blossom is no longer pale it regains it’s color is beginning to heal. Perhaps it takes in the moonlight when the saphire moon shines. |
| Many years prior | Morgreth, when the timing is right (or Felsawn but probably Morgreth), he goes into the 4 kingdoms and recruits, secretly, a few wielders from each kingdom and plants them, with an oath, to serve in secrecy all of their days. (Is it a couple who needs to have children to continue the wielder powers, but maybe they don’t tell them?) |
| There is a sign: a star in the east, of the coming of the deliverer, Seldinolum. 5 years before. And so, Gwen, Talon, the woman maiden of the castle, Jestro, the woman sings the after the prophecy which really sings the prophecy song to other words, and activates something in Clal? Not sure who else. 5 years is too short a time. Maybe it’s a baby, or a child. Children, Morgreth takes. Not sure. |
| RISHK - Rythe instance | They were heading up to meet with King Emish, as they just got word that King Emish has a most interesting bit of news, they were headed to scheme and to be in their “hide out” |
| RISHK - King Emish tips them off | About Talon having more than just backsmith skills. He enhances his craft with (fire and earth) powers. Or just “earth” powers. Which, the RISHK believe that he can help them reenter the Inner Kingdom’s with Earth power, just like Talon. |
| King emish and king nelbierd | King Emish needs information about the land so “buddies up” with the most high king. After years of worming around, his one goal is to find a wielder who can help them get aback into the inner kingdoms to steal the crystals before the chosen one is found. |
| King Emish finds out | One day, the king and King Emish are eating together, they talk about weapons, needs of King Emish, somehow it comes up that Talon is no ordinary blacksmith. He’s “gifted.” “What do you mean ‘gifted.’” Do not tell, but it’s like Talon wields a command over the metal and stone he works with. It’s uncanny, the precision, the balance, the quailty, and the speed. And, sometimes, he comes up with the most rare jewels and stone and metal. There is something about his work that has always seemed a bit magical. |
| Torment Talon to make weapons | Force Talon, create a place for Talon to have to use his wielder powers to speed up the creation of the weapons. Skeldruc is assigned to watch, through his illusion methods. They built a hideout underneath the blacksmith’s shop so Skeldruc can watch him. Krothwing stands by to be the messenger once the proof is obtained. |
| The Moment | One day, Skeldruc spies Talon going into a hidden room where he uses his powers to finish his work quicker. He’s cursing Renthar and the RISHK as he does it. What Skeldruc does not know is that Talon is preparing other things for the future in some way, for some reason, for someone. |
| He see’s him do it, waits till nightfall, then sends Krothwing to gether the others, then swiftly meets them in their hideout. |
| Prologue and beyond | The prologue dialogue happens, they are convinced that Talon can help them in their design to enter the inner kingdom. They decide to kidnap him, and tell Womlon that they’ve found a wielder. |
| Ch1 old friend | They leave Lyrune, rythe comes, talks about RISHK |
| Ch2 Camp fire | Stories and such, gifts, the river |
| Ch4 Eldan | Ansa’s dream, Market, Gwen, Talon gone, the inn |
| Ch5 The Exam | Exam, Clal quiet, MEET SOME MEAN BOYS, then a nice boy, run to the “chosen chamber” |
| Ch6 Ansa worries | Ansa to castle, Hittle, to “chosen chamber” |
| Ch 7 chosen chamber | Chosen chamber with Morgreth, find the Book of Legends, Morgreth leaves before they find out the words can’t be read, Jestro, exit through tunnel, need to go to Talon, first go to Gwen |
| Ch 8 Gwen’s and Talon’s | Back to Gwen, victuals and clothing, Talon’s place, burns by RISHK, (grab the sword and other weapons) , barely escape flames |
| Ch 9 Meeting Morgreth | Head to the woods and sleep, wake up, meets Morgreth, to tell the families that the kids are okay??? (Not sure about this part, not sure I want the city to catch on that Clal and Rythe and Ansa caused trouble.) Hittle lead them. Decide to go North as they believe the RISHK have Talon and they know that the RISHK have dealings in the North. HITTLE leads them and they go because they take them North. |
| Ch 10 Amnbir | Amnbir, Gulnerye, the translator |
| Ch 11 Dragon Tail river | Up the river, the guards attack, through the waterfall wall |
| Ch 12 | Fall behind water fall which causes Clal and the rest to finally realize what’s happening, that Clal, combined with the stone…has earth moving power. (1. The stone lighting up in the examination. 2. Opening up the “chosen one” chamber 3. Activating the Gulnerye symbol in the Amnber stone. 4. Moving the stone behind the waterfall. Clal is, unskilled and cannot wield his power properly yet. They find a tunnel. They don’t know where it leads but they hear voices. They come to a place where the wall is blocked off by stone and cement. They hear some voices. Talking. Find a wall that is “walled up” and hear voices…overhear where Talon is being taken. Outskirts of Emish North kingdom castle. They get out…opening the wall up after voices are gone, then closing it. Find themselves in a hideout. RISHK HIDE OUT |
| Gain some facts. Maybe it’s not about the instrument but it’s about the song. That’s the dragon summoner. There’s no instrument, only Clal, and the prophecy song, and his voice. No one knows the song. There’s no horn, no flute, it’s Clal’s voice. (Clal is the summoner, but he doesn’t find out until he’s there, in the dimension, realizing he doesn’t have the summoner and that he has to figure out how to summon the dragon. He says, “I am the dragon summoner.” |
| Ch 12 | So instead of finding the summoner, they find the RISHK hideout, which was not intended. |
| Ch 12 | They enter the hideout. |
| Ch 12 | They hear voices and right when Clal was about to touch the wall and listen, Ansa grabs his hand and tells him not to touch the wall. |
| Ch 12 | They hear that Talon is being taken to Reubus, where the Twisted Peak and Kelvkoroth is hidden. They are going to attempt to force Talon to simulate “the chosen one’s powers” to move earth and search around for the entrance. Renthar thinks he knows where it is. |
| Ch 12 | They then enter the RISHK chamber. HIGH STAKES. What do they learn there? |
| Ch 12 | Perhaps that since they just learned and understand now that Clal is a “wielder” they learn that the RISHK are wielders too. |
| Ch 12 | Rythe turns into search and hunt mode. He knows there’s something there that can help them with their quest, but that if they take anything, someone will surely know that “someone-they” were there. They find some specific things. And Rythe takes something but doesn’t tell, hides it, and they find out later what it is. |
| Ch 12 | They find out they are wielders too: [Renthar: Water/Nilth, Krothwing: air/Edaph, Imforo: fire/Kelv, Skeldruk: Earth/Mir, Womlon-Hanonethaine: light] |
| Ch 12 | Clal, Rythe, and Ansa start to panic as they see no way out. But, Clal realizes that they are wielders and that have to exit through the “closed-stone-doorway” and they have to find it before they come back. There are glowing balls of fire in the four corners. |
| Ch 12 | They exit the hideout, hear the RISHK coming and thrust into the woods, running for their lives again. |
| Ch 13 | To get Talon, that’s the plan, but they decide they need greater help as the RISHK are too powerful, they just found out how powerful. They are running to hide. They need help. They need to escape so the RISHK do not catch them. Hittle helps them, guides them again. But where? |
| Ch 13 | They are traveling north north west direction. Rythe encourages Clal to move some rocks, to bury or hide them somehow. And they do. And the wrong RISHK follow. It’s Krothwing again. Had he been spying on them. They do not know. But they are well hidden. But, they find out more of their plans from a comment Krothwing makes. It’s Skeldruc again that runs after them too, and they both talk, the two RISHK. In fact, Clal and the lot stop when they should be running, and Clal is trying to move the rocks…something to hide them. Maybe they find a cliff, small, lava rock, they open up a stone door there and hid within…or something. |
| Ch 14 | They travel further north and end up coming to the ocean, they wait there. There is no floating island, but they decide to study the ancient language, interpreters, and try to look at the pictures and maps, they find a map of the bottom of Edaphlas and a doorway on the bottom. They read the page and can only make out a few words. |
| Ch 14 | Doorway. Under the waves. Waves. Hide. Under. Chosen. Passage. |
| Ch 14 | They realize they need to find the floating island. So they continue to run west across the shoreline. They realize they need a boat too. |
| Ch 14 | They run west…and see the clouds, the ocean is getting more timultuous. They realize there is no wind, but that the waves are heaving themselves upon each other for no reason. |
| Ch 14 | They still need a boat. Or, maybe they run past the timultuous waves…and see a fisherman. They flag him down, he comes in and shores up. They talk to him. It is a boy, one of the boys that Clal met from the examination. He offers the boat, then tells Clal to come visit him some time. |
| Ch 14 | They go back to the waters and the sky grows dark, they embark. |
| Ch 15 is also Ch 14 |
| Ch 16 The Ocean Deep | Go toward the storm, and see the clouds in the sky, Ansa questions that they are going into the ocean with no dragon summoner. Clal continues to press forward, with no dragon summoner, but he keeps going. He feels and knows that he will find the summoner. end chapter with boat tipping over |
| Ch 17 A way through it | Find the water door, 5 dimensions, the almost death to Clal |
| Ch 17.2 | Wake up, feels like he is dead, summon the dragon, dragon comes, shows Hanone, then dragon takes him back through the dimensions to the dark raging storm to save his friends, ending the chapter with Clal falling off and into the great deep. |
| Ch 18 Taken | No RISHK, just Rythe and Ansa trying to keep alive. Then they go to the cliffs of the dawning of time (I don’t want this to feel like a second climax though. How to retrieve Rythe and Ansa in a less frantic way?) |
| Ch 19 The cliffs of the dawning of time | Fly over beauty of Illia, talk to dragon, they say good bye, but how will Clal be able to summon the dragon? Will him singing the song somehow magically reach Sedrak’s ears and heart??? And where is Sedrak going? (To meet with Morgreth?) They enter, the chamber, find out many things like, the crystals, the other things, Sedrak doesn’t know anything about this place and is limited as he’s been asleep and in the inner kingdom |
| The End | The last two things they discover is that there are 3 more companions that they need in their quest, they go through the door which smells like apples, and enter the cottage of their old home somehow magically through a portal. “Turl, we’re back,” Clal said, “but we can’t stay long.” |