Shanna - 9/1
Magic System -
- Fire
- Love - soul Spirit
- Sacrifice, (blood, pain => gives you power)
- Invisibility
- Elements
- Earth
- Air
- Water
- Fire
- Soul, love
- Combine elements -
Cut Off Elf Ears
Cover the ears and the RISHK => LENDS TO THE RISHK GARB
Or cut off
World Building
- When chapter by chapter critique - best thing put it in best shape…
Writers Group - at someone’s house,
What is subjective and what is not
Many readers
Chapter titles: …
Put in conflict…
First Draft - rough
Second Draft
- Fix beginning
- Add 2-3 RISHK scenes
Clal grows - in magical ability