Book 5 Thought Dump
End...thousands of stone seeds, islands, and white dragons like angels......hanone means land of white dragons. Red is color of rishk. Blood..... . and their dragon is white turned red
End: in the distance, thousands of white birds, no, dragons, coming to take to their kingdoms
- After defeating Womlon…
- …Clal has to activate the bringing of Hanone to Illia
- He leads the people to the south…
Or
- In order for Clal to Lure or Break Womlon from abandonment, he has to cause the two continents, Illia and Hanone, to collide.
- This will cause the magic to discapate
- And there will be fire and water and flood and earth quaking
- And there will emerge the Womlon
- And there they will battle over several different terrains
- And the Rishk will battle
- And the companions
And
- Larkin was never meant to marry. He dies.
- Skyla may die too.
- They return through the Arches in the End, however.
- Or perhaps the wizards summon the Combining of the two worlds
- Or finish off the purification of the worlds so that it truly is a sea of glass
Book 5: Climax Scene
Setting ideas
on ocean shore
on mountain – Clal brought their by Sedrak
At Womlon’s fortress which is a castle turned black, a grotesk and mutated change from what it used to be
Forest terrain
On a mountain cliff
Womlon leads Clal to a place where he wants to defeat him at. Somehow the banished are already there awaiting “The One’s” defeat. In the climax scene, these Characters are there and will be fighting the following:
Clal (and help by Leara) against Womlon
Ryth and Ansa against Renthar
Larkin, Skyla, and Hittle against Krothwing
Morgreth against Skeldruc
Sedrak against Imforo
Concerns: Why would the other major characters want to kill the banished? Perhaps they will be imprisoned until the flame of Nilthinon causes them to turn to ash. How will the people on Cul and the people on Hanone be ready to fight when they will only have about 30 minutes till their shores collide? There must be another way to make the suspense happen. I want Womlon’s forces to breakthrough the water wall that will occur when the continents collide. Won’t the colliding of Old and New world cause Womlon to have advantage over Cul as he sweeps over it destroying everything as quick as he can.
Book Five: The Heart: Love
Hanone: The Ancient Kingdom
Plot
Characters
The F’element of Love and Its Lesson
God in Cul and the Heart Chamber
Ideas
Theme: All nature will return to itself:
Skyland returns to where it came from
The Four Waters flow back into the fountain
The entire contant returns to the Old World, coliding and fusing itself to its eastern shores
All of the Magicons are returned
The Mountain
The Skyland
Cul returns to Hanone
Then, the people return to the land
People from Mirrim
People from Nilthinon
The trees in a certain (ordained) forest will become younger and younger and eventually appear as a seed on the ground
The banished are not killed in the final battle. So what is to be done with them then.
When a new land is claimed, a ceremony is performed. This is what happens when Hanone is reclaimed. This portion of the story is the beginning of the end.
When the seed stone is taken from its place, the earth detaches
It is morning. The sun is up, and while the continent moves towards Hanone, the sun does not move because the the whole continent is moving. This is manifested as a sign. This is where some things on Cul return to their beginning state.
The Final Fight
Womlon grabs a piece of glass which turns into a sword.
Clal grabs a piece of wood which turns into a staff.
They grab things and use them as they change into what so ever they desire.
(This would be an awesome scene to watch.)
Book 5
When the f'elment is taken from the heart of the earth, the kingdom that it was taken from loses some supreme virtue and so Clal has to replace the f'element with something of equal value. This idea could foster a subplot where Clal would not only have to retreave the f'element but have to bring something with him to replace it with.
Or perhaps they don't need to be replaced but, unlike with the first four previous f'elements, the fifth one, the stone seed, does effect its environment when it is removed. Why?
because the seed is the source of life on Cul. When Culanthra removes it, the earth begind to do or lose power; die. All the power of Cul is transferred into the sword.
the continent then beginds to digress beginning with the seperation of Cul from the ocean floor. It sails back to its mother earth. Many things return to their first estate but not all things.
Culanthra breaks through the earth and become sa physical form. Her mission is over.
Outter Kingdoms’ Roles
Each kingdom holds safe a special part of Cul that is to remain unaltered and hallowed. Example:
The four waters – each water lane is a different size from the rest
Skyland
The Moved Mountain
and so forth…
There are one of these in every Kingdom that will return to the earth in the 5th Book.
In Book 5 Clal sees when the earth and the people are changed to live forever???
A Legend
The light of a new day
The question: “How do you know when the night is over and a new day has begun?”
The answer: “When you look into the east and see the face of a woman and can say, ‘She is my sister,’ and when you look inito the east and see the face of aman and can say, ‘He is my brother,’ then you know the light of a new day has come.”
This idea is based on the article found in the January 2008 Friend titled, “The Light of a New Day.”
I want to apply this to mystery. Clal may see something in the faces of people that will cause him to understand that he is ready. Clal will change.
He wonders why he sees things in other faces like changes or slight movements. People do not see as he sees which causes some interest in the reader.
The New Sun
The world needs the rising of a new sun. The daily sun serves no lasting purpose but the rising of a more significant sun can be addative.
The New Sun- is blue, like the “fair flame”. It breaks forth from the satutue as a normal sun would exploding in rays of blue and rising while the cliff melts and the whole room desolves. But the lighut dims slightly which allows the on looker to persice the revolving swodsd with in a translucent, blue sphere.
When the blue sun rises the earth will be changed forever.
Sword and the Stone
The fifth and final f'elment is inserted into the statue, but nothing happens. They wonder what to do. But, drawing conclusions from what he has been thinking about when it comes to swords, Clal instinctively runs to the statue and thrusts his sword into the statue which immediately melts away into the statue. Then, the weapon to defeat Womlon rises to fulfill its destiny. Clal receives a sword in the beginning of the book; not a fantastically ornamented or meaningful sword but just an ordinary sword. Through Gulnerye's Legend and the Journals of Millurin Pike, he will find out that a sword is also needed to make the weapon in the statue. This sword will be compared to Clal and that as the sword will become strong and fulfill a great destiny, so will Clal. This ordinary sword will become the sword that will defeat Womlon. And Clal, an ordinary boy will be the extraordinary individual that will wield it.
The New World
Many things wil happen when the contents meet and Womlon is defeated.
Upon the ancient foundations of Amnber a new castle will be constructed either by hands or spirits or the fire people.
A new King will be crowned
The four kingdoms will be reestablished.
Prophecies will be fulfilled
A new Wizard will be named
Each race will have certain responsibilities at the dawning of time and the colliding of the 2 worlds.
The Wizards
Ottomus and Felsawn pass through the viel when their work is completeled. They are suspended in time until the time comes for them to return…in the final book.
Book 5: Climax Scene
Setting ideas
on ocean shore
on mountain – Clal brought their by Sedrak
At Womlon’s fortress which is a castle turned black, a grotesk and mutated change from what it used to be
Forest terrain
On a mountain cliff
Womlon leads Clal to a place where he wants to defeat him at. Somehow the banished are already there awaiting “The One’s” defeat. In the climax scene, these Characters are there and will be fighting the following:
Clal (and help by Leara) against Womlon
Ryth and Ansa against Renthar
Larkin, Skyla, and Hittle against Krothwing
Morgreth against Skeldruc
Sedrak against Imforo
Concerns: Why would the other major characters want to kill the banished? Perhaps they will be imprisoned until the flame of Nilthinon causes them to turn to ash. How will the people on Cul and the people on Hanone be ready to fight when they will only have about 30 minutes till their shores collide? There must be another way to make the suspense happen. I want Womlon’s forces to breakthrough the water wall that will occur when the continents collide. Won’t the colliding of Old and New world cause Womlon to have advantage over Cul as he sweeps over it destroying everything as quick as he can.
The Wizards will come out of the Three Arches after Cul and Hanone colide. This will look like Joseph Smith's “First Vision.” Delvin will stand by his door and the 2000 young warriors will then appear and file through. Delvin's door may also yeild a few major characters that died during the course of the story thus far. I may end up killing off his twin sister then having her come back at that time at the Three Arches.
I could kill off Ansa in the third book by Skeldruc which could help Clal overcome his inability to kill.
During the final battle, Clal is humming the Song of the Earth and gains on Womlon. But Womlon inflicts pain which causes Clal to break his steady humming or singing.
Book Five: The Heart: Love
Hanone: The Ancient Kingdom
Plot
Characters
The F’element of Love and Its Lesson
God in Cul and the Heart Chamber
Ideas
Theme: All nature will return to itself:
Skyland returns to where it came from
The Four Waters flow back into the fountain
The entire contant returns to the Old World, coliding and fusing itself to its eastern shores
All of the Magicons are returned
The Mountain
The Skyland
Cul returns to Hanone
Then, the people return to the land
People from Mirrim
People from Nilthinon
The trees in a certain (ordained) forest will become younger and younger and eventually appear as a seed on the ground
The banished are not killed in the final battle. So what is to be done with them then.
When a new land is claimed, a ceremony is performed. This is what happens when Hanone is reclaimed. This portion of the story is the beginning of the end.
When the seed stone is taken from its place, the earth detaches
It is morning. The sun is up, and while the continent moves towards Hanone, the sun does not move because the the whole continent is moving. This is manifested as a sign. This is where some things on Cul return to their beginning state.
The Final Fight
Womlon grabs a piece of glass which turns into a sword.
Clal grabs a piece of wood which turns into a staff.
They grab things and use them as they change into what so ever they desire.
(This would be an awesome scene to watch.)
Book 5
When the f'elment is taken from the heart of the earth, the kingdom that it was taken from loses some supreme virtue and so Clal has to replace the f'element with something of equal value. This idea could foster a subplot where Clal would not only have to retreave the f'element but have to bring something with him to replace it with.
Or perhaps they don't need to be replaced but, unlike with the first four previous f'elements, the fifth one, the stone seed, does effect its environment when it is removed. Why?
because the seed is the source of life on Cul. When Culanthra removes it, the earth begind to do or lose power; die. All the power of Cul is transferred into the sword.
the continent then beginds to digress beginning with the seperation of Cul from the ocean floor. It sails back to its mother earth. Many things return to their first estate but not all things.
Culanthra breaks through the earth and become sa physical form. Her mission is over.
how will Clal get back to deposite the f'elements?
BYWAY OF illia, cave? Supernatuarl travel???