Book 1 - Thought Dump
Aug19
- Clal and his family and Crescent-Keep are all on the East coast of Illia.
- Dragon summoner in here’s chamber
- Is the Twisted Mountain Crescent-Keep? (the other peak)
- Clal always drawn to the east like his future is out there beyond the ocean.
- Look far out there “book ends” Book 5 he looks out to east and flys in back of Sedrak…in fact
- Clal looks out into the east while a mamoth wave comes and Hanone.
- He then flyes to his own new kingdom on the bakc of Sedrak
- Prologue -
- White dragon, maybe no Womlon?
- Flames already starting
- A few words from Womlon
- “You have no light,” felsawn said
- Hint of magic
- Fire on side of mountain side cliff
- Earth moved
- Water splashes “too far up” to be normal
- A glowing stone
- Hints of the 5 Element magic
- Aftermath scene of battle
- Takes moonlight and shifts it
- Who’s perspective - the camera follows Felsawn, not Womlon
- Aerol & Willa stay home
- Turl (19) and Mina (10) are riding up front with the mule pulling the cart, and will man the market.
- Clal & Ansa (16) are in the back with the barrals of apples (no comfort there)
- Tallon is uncle to them as Aerol’s brother.
- Tallon disappears on the 3rd day
- Then Clal catches a glymps of Rythe going to the castle.
- They share news of their “comings and goings” and Rythe said that he may know what happened. “How would you ever know? That’s impossible.” Clal said. “Come with me,” Rythe said.
- In the story there is a lighting storm - middle of the book
- Exam
- Clal shows Morgreth his stone, which is a sign that he’s the one as well.
- During the examination there is no stone, he just talks to the boys
- 3 Criteria
- From the East
- Brings light stone, pure, blue
- Not supposed to be there, accident
- Opening scend of Chapter 1
- lunar / solar eclipse
- Sunrise
- Gwynn is Willa’s friend
- The twins came to Aerol and Willa becasue they are Wielders in hiding.
- Tallon and Gwynn are also wielders
- Clal and Ansa’s parents were wielders
- Wielder - creed - wield power -
- Melds are wielders?
- Aerol and Willa made up stories of how they came into their family, but the stories are not true.
The elves come as Clal is dyning in the ice dimension.
The elves take Clal to the next door
They create bubles or wind tunnels under the water so that they can get easily through
They come to either a water part
Yes, a water part where they create wind tunnels
Then the sea of glass
The dragon, like aan angel comes down as the song of the phrophecy is playing.
The dragon leaves with Clal on his back, the twin elves wait.
Dragon takes Clal up so farr that Hanone is visible
And talks to him….
Comes back down
- They go to the Cliffs of Dawning
- They see an iron door
- Only Clal can enter - has tree on outside
- He touches and it opens or moves away…
- It’s the journey of the Leh’s Dream
- At the end he hears the prhophecy
- He comes out
- All disappears and it’s an empty room
- They pass through to the place where they deposit
- …or something like that.
Prologue:
- Felsawn and Womlon (2021 version)
- Ottomus and Felsawn (2014 version)
- Define purpose: what do I want the reader to learn and anticipate
- The reader would figure out the meaning at the end of Book 1
- But not all of the meaning
- Goddess moment: when clal is about to perish in the ice stage of his ocean-dimension journey, the twins come down and rescue him. Skyla and Larkin.
- They find out about the other four stones at the end of Book 1 -
- and perhaps they find the chest and the Book of Legends in the Dawning of Time Cave
- So what does be given or is given in the secret room in the castle if not the:
- Book?
- They see the light or magic with the stone
- Given the stone
- See the walls and pictures to remember and learn from
- Get the key
- What tools are they given?
- “No,” said Clal, “I know where to get some weapons.”
Book 4
children will be a huge part of both the Inner and Outer Kingdoms.
After one has passed through “Lehi's Dream” the words uttered by The Fair Flame of Nilthinon what was uttered will be kept in a pouch on the arm of a Nilthinion. They will refer to this sort of Patriarchal Blessing often.
The prophecy happens when he Goes into the room of “Lehi’s Dream” shown by Leara maybe?
Morgreth, son of Felsawn: The Guide (Wizard 3)
Prepares a People (Partnership)
Wizard 3, being unable to aid The One in his task must prepare a people to travel with The One. This is extremely difficult as he must not make himself known that he is guiding certain individuals to cross paths with The One. (He could not just approach someone with this sales pitch, “Excuse me sir, would you be interested in risking your life to aid The One in preparing to defeat The Dark One with little or no chance of success by way of no reward in the end or before the journey is embarked upon.” Point made. Needless to say, he does find a way to execute the same purpose.
Wizard 3 is raised in such a way that he is taught the many languages of Cul Country including some animal speech. He is also known as being an outgoing individual being taught phsycology and the behavioral concepts of each race. He was prepared by his Father for his life calling. He was prepared in the art of proper communication.
Each person that Wizard 3 must find will help him find each F'element. Five individuals will travel with him.
- Love: Leara: his twin sister will help here.
- Song: Lark: an elf that can float or fly will have been taught about the Sky-Land from his youth. His people are known for their song
- Beauty:
- Fire: a half fire person
- Invisibility: A character that sees things that others cannot.
Book Two: The Mountain: Beauty
Kelvkaroth: The Inner-Kingdom
Plot
Characters
The F’element of Beauty and Its Lesson
God in Kelvkaroth
T
Ideas
The Leaf
Clal picked up the leaf and searched its surface. “Ryth, there’s a leaf here. How do you suppose it got here.” Ryth removed himself from the corner where he was searching and came to Clal’s side. “It probably blew in from the outer realm.”
“But the opening to the cave was blowing out air, not blowing it in.” Clal spoke in a whisper. “I feel a draft and it is going out, against our chests. The leaf must have come from down there.”
“Perhaps the leaf was carried from outside and dropped at this point of the passage way. I really don’t think this means much Clal.” Ansa stated as she shook her head.
“Yet, the reality is that we are looking for something and not simply travelers with a diffinate and defined destination. Entertaining possibilities is to our advantage.” Clal stated then focused his attention on the leaf. “I wonder what kind of leaf this is. Look at the veins in it, they almost look silver. And the tecture is much different than any I have felt. There must be something more.”
“If we are sure that there is an Inner-Kingdom beyond the opening of this passage way then, we can assume that this leaf could yield some sort of evidence of such an existence. What do we know so far about the f’element that we are searching for?” Lark spoke as he searched the faces of his comrads.
“I think the greatest manifestation of our path set before us is what was displayed on the mural at Time’s Dawning. It showed a mountain.” Ryth spoke.
“Yes, I took the liberty to copy it down.” Ansa revealed the pages of a book in which she used to illustrate the mural’s depiction of their quest. Everyone surrounded Ansa as she took out her light stone and began to speak.
The Sun Spot: From circle to oval
Clal held up a thin piece of metal and held it under a circle of light that was protruding from the ceiling above. As he continued to search the metal he bent the metal out of habit which caused the circle of light to become an oval. This reminded him of the oval he had seen a few weeks ago which sparked a thought and answered a question which caused a solution and now they’re on their way. Somehow the bending of the metal and the making of the oval revealed something in the metal that he would not have seen. Perhaps the protruded parts of the metal were aligned and created a pattern.
Veins: The Theme
Veins in leaves, veins in rock, veins in body; same veins in mountain is same veins in leaf. The viens in the rock grow and are magical.
Clal catches a glimmer of a vein that is different from all of the rewst of the silver veins in the rocks. They do not figure it out then but this is the vein that is from the center of the earth, from the stone seed.
lava purification, beauty, wealth, gold, value, fire, song, illusion, stone, heat, purity, process
The Tree that Bears Stone Fruit
It bears special fruit on special occasions and they wait for it.
Book Four: The Fire People: Fire
About Nilthinon: The Inner-Kingdom
In Nilth water is the theme. Water flows through the walls.
Plot
Characters
The F’element of Fire and Its Lesson
If Clal walks on water to get into Nilthinon, he exits the place by walking on stairs of fire. (First baptism by water, then baptism by fire. Jesus was only baptized when he was ready to fulfill his mission.) These steps disappear after he steps to another step. The fire is not yellow/orange/red fire, it is blue and white fire.
God in Nilthinon
The flame within us and, for Nilthinions, also on the outside.
Ideas
Lehi’s dream: My original Idea was to just have the physical representation of the dream within a chamber in Nilth, however, if it does exist then there must be a history behind it. Here is the history:
Lehi and Nephi will be represented as two individuals; Rakonor and Rakonan. The story goes that Rakonor saw a dream and saw Lehi’s dream. Rakonan wanted to understand the dream so he meditated and then saw it. Great meaning which is linked to the Flame of Nilthinon. Rakonor wanted his people to remember this dream and its imporatne so he began to build it in the center of his castle. But nbefore he was to die he told his son to finish building it which he did. Then Rakonon used the f’elemnt to activate it so that it shows the dream in action and required all NIlthinions to pass through it in their coming of age.
The Flame of Nilthinon
This fire, in the end, will do one of two things: It will either purify the people because it will be as a refiners fire. Or, it will burn the entire person to nothing. The concept is simple. If the person is mostly pure but have a little impurity here and there, then, the burning will not destroy them but just pain them a little. If another person is mostly impure with a little purity, then most of the person will be purged which will cause the little impurity to be swallowed up in detriment. The people of Nilthinon are the purest of all the people of the land. That’s why they are the keeper of the flame, until the final day.
The Moved Moutain
This story will focus on how a love of riches becomes a weakness for Womlon. There is a society that lives under the mountain. They posses a stone that is sought after by Womlon. This is the amber looking stone that fills the mountain.
The Sword and the Statue
The sword may have the colors of the four outer-kingdoms but the elements of the inner-kingdoms.
On the statue the holes where the f’elments go will be in the place where they were found. There will be a key that will show north, east, south, west like on a map. Clal will learn that each f’element is to go in the designated place.
Clal and Lehi’s Dream
There will be aplace, a room, a hall dedicated to Lehi’s Dream. I(t will be a sacred place, a oplace where the fair flamemof Nilthinonon will be. It’s a spiritual journey that all must travel on when then come of age. It will begin at the Iron Rod and the individual will have to journey to the tree where the Flam e will appear in the tree. Along the way, flame peop0le without body figures like spirirts will appear. Each person experiences something different. The fair flame of Nilthinons will be seen by all.
Lehi's Dream
The Spirit – The Flame possessed by all Nilthinions
I had three ideas today:
Foyer Ceiling
It was sectioned off into about 10 sections on the ceiling. What if it was each section of the ceiling had a different image or painting in it?
- Perhaps in the room of secrets when they all meet and it lights up
Book Two: The Mountain: Beauty
Kelvkaroth: The Inner-Kingdom
Plot
Characters
The F’element of Beauty and Its Lesson
God in Kelvkaroth
T
Ideas
The Leaf
Clal picked up the leaf and searched its surface. “Ryth, there’s a leaf here. How do you suppose it got here.” Ryth removed himself from the corner where he was searching and came to Clal’s side. “It probably blew in from the outer realm.”
“But the opening to the cave was blowing out air, not blowing it in.” Clal spoke in a whisper. “I feel a draft and it is going out, against our chests. The leaf must have come from down there.”
“Perhaps the leaf was carried from outside and dropped at this point of the passage way. I really don’t think this means much Clal.” Ansa stated as she shook her head.
“Yet, the reality is that we are looking for something and not simply travelers with a diffinate and defined destination. Entertaining possibilities is to our advantage.” Clal stated then focused his attention on the leaf. “I wonder what kind of leaf this is. Look at the veins in it, they almost look silver. And the tecture is much different than any I have felt. There must be something more.”
“If we are sure that there is an Inner-Kingdom beyond the opening of this passage way then, we can assume that this leaf could yield some sort of evidence of such an existence. What do we know so far about the f’element that we are searching for?” Lark spoke as he searched the faces of his comrads.
“I think the greatest manifestation of our path set before us is what was displayed on the mural at Time’s Dawning. It showed a mountain.” Ryth spoke.
“Yes, I took the liberty to copy it down.” Ansa revealed the pages of a book in which she used to illustrate the mural’s depiction of their quest. Everyone surrounded Ansa as she took out her light stone and began to speak.
The Sun Spot: From circle to oval
Clal held up a thin piece of metal and held it under a circle of light that was protruding from the ceiling above. As he continued to search the metal he bent the metal out of habit which caused the circle of light to become an oval. This reminded him of the oval he had seen a few weeks ago which sparked a thought and answered a question which caused a solution and now they’re on their way. Somehow the bending of the metal and the making of the oval revealed something in the metal that he would not have seen. Perhaps the protruded parts of the metal were aligned and created a pattern.
Veins: The Theme
Veins in leaves, veins in rock, veins in body; same veins in mountain is same veins in leaf. The viens in the rock grow and are magical.
Clal catches a glimmer of a vein that is different from all of the rewst of the silver veins in the rocks. They do not figure it out then but this is the vein that is from the center of the earth, from the stone seed.
lava purification, beauty, wealth, gold, value, fire, song, illusion, stone, heat, purity, process
The Tree that Bears Stone Fruit
It bears special fruit on special occasions and they wait for it.
how will Clal get back to deposite the f'elements?
Book 1: by way of dragon
Climax scenes
book 1: while Clal is trying to leave on Sedrak
(Inspired by a cough drop in its translucent wrapper)
Underground and in the tunnels the walls are partially uncovered baring a stange colored stone behind the dirt. Clal takes a closer look and sees through the yellowish stone and sees a face staring at him which looks surprised and quickly disappears. Throght that stone, is an entire civilization. They have to find the entrance.
Patriarchal Blessing: 2 parts
Part 1: recieves in the High Chamber room in the form of a prophecy.
regarding his destiny to find the f'elments
Part 2: By the Fair Flame of Nilthinon
regarding his destiny to defeat Womlon and all evil